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By  sunil sachdeva   18:33 | 25/Dec/2007 | 14 Comment(s)
MY WEALTH MY GRIEF

O’ Lord



I’ll gladly share \


My wealth and happiness


With one and all



But my grief


With none at all




Those are treasured moments


Of my strife



Locked with gifted memories


Of life



When morns golden rays blacked


All colors



Nights silvery octopus tentacles


Squeezed life



Hot lyrical gem talks melted


down ears, 



When doors slammed


At sight



Turning colors of hope


Black or white



Candled  own blood to


burn life



Shed not a tear lest wash


memories away



Only my shadow clung


By my side



Pushing over rivers filled


Of hungry crocodiles


 


How can I share such daunting


memories 



O’ Lord



 Just for momentary relief


Start snatching smiles


Rob some of happiness


Watering their eyes


Please’ don’t make me so selfish


‘O Lord, \


Lest’ people start


Loosing faith on ‘Thee 



Facing the sea, with sun setting behind


Shimmering on waves my shadow wept


Urging to drop a tear and loose my wealth


But Nay My Lord, I’ve saved them for ‘Thee



When we meet, kneeling at ‘Thy feet


I'll Shed all my tears n wet ‘Thy robe


But never shall I share my grief


Not even with ‘Thee


My Lord


Not even with ’Thee



I’ll gladly share


My wealth and happiness


With one and all


But my grief


With none at all


 


$kuki

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By  sunil sachdeva   06:11 | 3/Dec/2007 | 21 Comment(s)
VIEWS/CRITS/COMMENTS - NEEDED

Rhymes are known to be the building block of the human pysche, they have the tendencey to stay with one for a lifetime


While it is common knowledge that over 80% of higher education is lost with passage of time, wheras in the case of rhymes learnt at a 'kinder' age, its exactly the opposite - over 90% of them, stay embedded and, cling on to ones memory, for a lifetime.


 


They also infuse aspirations, dreams and fantasy into a child's mind. Perhaps that may be the reason why mankind is making progress by leaps n bound since the past few centuries.


 


Do You feel the time has come when we should opt for some change in child education by giving the child a new set of dreams and aspirations through rhymes/poems/stories etc., which are more appropriate and relevant to his time.


 


 When today even a one year old child prefers to play and or handle mobile phones/remote controls etc., over and above his other traditional toys, the corridoors of our shools are still echoing with many such rhymes which seem to have lost relevance with time. 



This is a thought, I feel, for all to ponder upon. I will appreciate crits/comments from one and all.


An example is given below. Please feel free to post your comments or e mail me at skuki@rediffmail.com


existing


Twinkle Twinkle Little Star



How I wonder what you are



Up above the world so high



Like a diamond in the sky



New Thought




Teeny Weeny Little Star



Now I know What You Are



Why You shine in the night



Like a Diamond bright



I'll Come to see you soon



After I've Been to The Moon

Have we not passed the age of wondering? When today man has left his footprints on the moon, we are still singing with 'How I Wonder'.


Plz friends I have nothing against the rhyme 'Twinkle Twinkle', it truly is the most wonderful creation of all times, I too have grown with it, so may have the majority of this world and, the inspiration comes from it, to move ahead and not be stuck up with it, this new version is also a fallout from the great orignal rhyme.



Thanks n regards

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By  sunil sachdeva   22:21 | 25/Nov/2007 | 17 Comment(s)
The Last Journey

 


 


As the Sun of new Rains
begins to rise


Earth burys' yesters

under guise


 


Rustling leaves fly

Down the trees


 


Singing merrily
With the breeze


Perhaps, knowing,its

Their final journey


 


Still they come
Swaying with pride


Thinking not of the end
But a new life


 


Proud to be burried and
transformed into dust


 


To nurture a fresh spring
from earthen crust


 


 $kuki

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By  sunil sachdeva   14:19 | 14/Nov/2007 | 14 Comment(s)
'THORNS'

All my life I've been walking



On Thorns and Thorns and Thorns



No matter what I do



Its 'Thorns' all that I get



They greet me on every street



Every path I tread



Littered and strewn



Over every bed I slept



Some prick like 'Needles'



Some stab like 'Daggers'



Thriving on the colors


They ooze from my brains



 



But Lo' a fragrance



From not very far away



Allures me to go



On and On and On



To forget the pain the agony



And the hurting 'Thorn'



Whispering in my ears



"Its only roses you'll get



From bursting 'Thorns'



Only roses from



Bursting 'Thorns'".



 



$kuki



 



 

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By  sunil sachdeva   11:09 | 12/Nov/2007 | 7 Comment(s)
Polly the Parrot

Polly the Parrot sitting on a tree


Eating Guavuas just for free,


Tossed one up in the air


Down it fell fair n square


Hitting 'Robby' the Rabbit on his nose


Who was having an afternoon doze


Lost in the dreams of 'Princess' Lee'


Fighting the 'Dragons' to set her free


Startled and bruised up he shot


To see a Guava roll down the hill 


And  hear the 'Cackling Polly' fly


Past the chimney over the Mill


 


$kuki

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By  sunil sachdeva   07:19 | 8/Nov/2007 | 6 Comment(s)
Cherry n Berry(contd)

Cherry n Berry (2)  Continued


We are Cherry n Berry


We make all Creatures merry


They sang and sang over and over again, waving at the passersby on foot, bicycles, horseback and on ponies, Cherry honked the horn singing to the music :


Po PPaw Po Po PPaw- PawPoPaw-PPaw Po PPaw-w-w


Quite often this startled the horses they jumped and stood on their hind legs that nearly threw off the rider, the sheep and cattle scattered too, some ran up hill, some down, while a few stood ground staring with large innocent eyes. They laughed and laughed thumping the dashboard and singing :


We make the horses jump


Sheep n cattle run


To make all laugh


And have some fun


We are Cherry n Berry


We make all creatures merry


 


They passed many small towns and villages on way, children ran out to greet them, screamed with joy at seeing such a colorful van, running, shouting, waving, wishing them a happy n safe journey, following the van till it disappeared leaving behind a cloud of dust and the echoing sound of the Horn.


Po PPaw-PoPo PPaw-Po Po Pawww


The Valley vanished round a bend: a steep climb up the mountain track began. Their singing stopped. Cherry, had to concentrate on driving, this was his first trip through the mountains.


He had to deal with the steep climb sudden descent and the blind curves. The narrow track with broken metal and potholes looking like moon craters only added woes to his in experience.


Berry rested the guitar on the berth above his head, switched on the music system and slumped lower into his seat, looking out at the valley below. The mountain stream which had accompanied them throughout the journey now, looked like a necklace around the mountain, as it threaded its way through the valley.


They were now travelling at considerable height nearing the peak of this mountain track.


Berry, now lost in thoughts; how they had worked day n night druring the past week, to get this old rusty Van which they bought from the Village Baker, ready for this trip.


Their parents had assisted them, Sultan Singh, Cherry’s father, a farmer by profession was a good mechanic too, he broke down the engine cleaned, polished and overhauled it. Switching the ignition it roared like a young bull and gleamed in the sunlight as new.


While Rajah Khan, Berry’s father who was a shepherd scraped off the rust and old paint from the entire van, he oiled and greased the wheels, then revamped the upholstery with new colourful sheepskin to keep them warm. He also polished the walnut teak dashboard which now shone as new.


Both Berry n Cherry then set upon to paint the van. They both started with the interior, painting it with white enamel, then moved out.


 


Cherry took up the left side, while Berry set about painting the right side of the van.


 


Cherry drew a picture of a mountaineer, sitting near the snow covered peak of a mountain, heating a frozen bottle of an orange drink, over a bonfire; the Cherry n Berry flag fluttered in the breeze atop a snow tent that lay in the background.  On the snow outside the tent, was written with bold engraved letters:  -  


 


“ Its Free - Z - zeey --- Its Oran - G – geey ”.


 


 Berry drew a colourful scene of a girl dancing on a sea beach, a bottle of cola was wobbling on the waves with another slogan written Waverly over it, which too seemed as if dancing, while music filled the air. The slogan read as follows : -


 


Its fresh n Ic-e-e --- Coz --- Its Sp-ic-e-e-y


 


They both then moved to the back of the van and drew a life size Bottle of a Lemon drink and wrote a slogan which read : -


 


Its lim-mey-lim-mey --- Le – mo – ne-e-e-y


 


S-C-R-E-E-E-E-C-H-H the sound of tires burning on the metalled road, broke Berrys’ thoughts abruptly, he was thrown forward with full force and, would have certainly crashed into the dashboard but, for the seat belt securely tied around him.


 


Round a blind curve, Cherry, stamped down the brake pedal, with full force bringing the van to a sudden halt. Half leaping out the side window waving his fist, at the shepherd whose flock had completely blocked the road, he shouted;


 


“What the hell”, honking the horn with his other hand;


 


PO PPO PPO PPO PAWWWWWWWWWWW PPO PAWWWWW PPO,


 


Cherry screamed; “Get those stupid animals off the road”.  


 


The shepherd whose, large flock of sheep and cattle had completely blocked the road was startled too. He looked on alarmed at the situation shooing his flock in a confused manner. The cattle dispersed here and there, some ran uphill some down while some stood ground, staring at them as if, wondering what was wrong.


 


Berry, was shaken by the sudden change of events, gathered himself, looked out, at the helpless shepherd who was trying his best to clear the road, but animals are animals, they kept coming back on the road.


 


Berry, was also a shepherds’ son, understood the behaviour of animals, took pity on the poor shepherd, opened the door and alighted the van, to lend a helping hand.


 


“ Nyersey – Nyersey - Woosh - Hai-Hai-Hoosh”, he shooed the animals to clear the path for Cherry to drive the Van ahead.   


 


Having accomplished the task he waved adeiu, to the shepherd, moved ahead towards the van ascended it, smiling at Cherry who beamed back.


 


(To be Continued)


 


 


 


                                      

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By  sunil sachdeva   12:39 | 1/Nov/2007 | 10 Comment(s)
Cherry n Berry

Friends this is my first attempt to story writing ---- for children 6 to 10 years old. Few opening pages are being depicted here. The book will have colored illustrations on every page

 A free and fair opinion will be highly appreciated.....Thx......$kuki


This is the first Tale in the series


Cherry n Berry


Meet The Hufisian Princess


 


One fine summer morning, the Sun had just woken,rubbing his eyes with his thick fingers then raising its arms yawned, spreading an array of light tentacles over the beautiful valley of Kashmir.


The birds were out of the nests chirruping flying around happily on their daily chores.The sheep n the cattle were out too, grazing in the fields and meadows.

PO - PAW - PO - PO - PAWWWWW 

Berry n Cherry Drove down the village road, in their colorful and freshly painted Van. They were on their maiden voyage to deliver soft drinks (cool beverages)to a nearby town that lay about 100 Kilometres away.


 PO - PAW - PO - PO - PAWWWWW

Blowing the horn they entered the village, smiling and waving at the villagers who came out to greet them.

Cherry weaved the van through the narrow crowded lanes and brought it to a halt in front of the Baker's Shop.

Shouting, screaming, joyous children had followed the van and now stood all around it, chattering,giggling, whispering attracted by the colorful paintings and reading aloud the catchy slogans that were written all over the van .

Cherry n Berry jumped out of the van, walked across the street  towards a closed door, holding the latch Berry shook it

'Khat-Khat-Khit'

"Who is it" responded a heavy voice. An old man(The Town Baker) emerged opening the door clad in a white banyan and a checkered tehmat tied around his waist, he was wiping his bald head with a towel.

Seeing, Cherry n Berry a warm smile of recognition creased on his face and lighted up his eyes. He stood aside to let them in.

When attracted by the noisy children. The Baker turned his head towards the noise, his gaze fell on the colorful van, his mouth opened in awe, eyes in disbeleif, his jaw fell muttering.

"Yah Allah", as he moved briskly towards the van, circling all around while running his hand over the body of the van, turning to Cherry n Berry who had followed him, he said,

"You boys have done a marvelleous job, turned my old rusty van into a beautiful fairy.Truly both of you are magicians."


"Thank You Baker Uncle" said both Cherry n Berry.


"We have come to seek your blessings, its the first day of our job", added Berry.


The Baker raised his arms towards the skies and said,


"May Allah guide you both in all your endeavours and bless you with happiness and riches beyond any mans imagination".


Thanking the Baker, Cherry n Berry climbed up the van while waving to the villagers, who stood around watching them. Pulling the ignition Cherry shifted gear and eased the van through the narrow village lanes on their journey.


PO - PAW - PO - PO - PAWWWWW 

Cherry blew the horn as they left the village road, their eyes were moist with the warm and emotional send off by the villagers.

They drove in silence for a while, the road too wore a desrted look, it was early for the daily hustle bustle to start.


Berry broke the silence; he struck the chords on his guitar which he remebered to bring along, paying the notes they had recently prepared. Cherry too joined him thumping the dashboard the both sang;


We are Cherry n Berry

We make all creatures merry

We ferry their good

We make their sales

To boys and girls

Fishes and snails  

We are Cherry n Berry

   

More in my next and on receiving your most valued comments....regards.....$kuki

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By  sunil sachdeva   12:57 | 30/Oct/2007 | 7 Comment(s)
'GUM KA KHAZANA'(With English Alphas)

GUM KA KHAZANA

 

On request of some friends it is written with English ‘alphas’

 

 

Yarab Taqseem kar sakta hoon

Teri di hui saare Neyamatey

Magar Baant sakta Nahi apne Gum

 

Ye hai who nayab rattan

Miltey nahi sabhiko

Jo Khoon-e-Jigar ki Dastaan

Ansoon se Mittate Nahi

Aur Jala apne lahu se diya

Mohabbat ko kartey roshan

Milta unheeko yeh ‘Nazrana’

 

Bund ho Jisme kuch sunehri yaddein

Lipte hasseen chandni Pal

Chum chamatey Waqt Ke here

Daur Rahey Jo Jehan me mere

Kaissey baant sakta

Mein ye anmol ‘Khazana’

 'E-Rab' Tu hee Mujhe Bataa Na

 

Chund lamho ke sukon ke liye

cheen loo kissee ke

hoton ki muskarahat

karke usse gumgeen

 

itna kamjarf mat

bana mujhe Yaarab

kahi ho na jaaye

teree tauheen

 

Ye jaantey hai sub

Khushi Batney se hooti dugni

Gum batney se kum

Phir kyunkar kare

Aise Ghaatey ka sauda hum

 

Ha! Gar Qayamat ke din

'Ya-rab' tujhse hua samna

To ro parengey

Tere Daman se lipat ke hum

Par na bategey

Tujhsey bhi ‘Apne Gum’

Tujhse bhi ‘Apne Gum’.

 

Yarab Taqseem kar sakta hoon

Teri di hui saare Neyamatey

Magar Baant sakta Nahi apne Gum

 

$kuki

 

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By  sunil sachdeva   02:23 | 28/Oct/2007 | 8 Comment(s)
Gum Ka Khazana

यारब तक्सीम कर सकता हूँ
दी हुई तेरी सारी नेयमते
मगर बाट सकता नही अपने गम

ये है वो नायाब रत्न,
मिलते नही सभिको
जला अपने लहू से दिए
मोहब्बत को जो रखते रोशन
ख़ून-ए-जिगर की दास्तान
आनसूयों से मित्ताते नही
मिलता उन्हीको ये नज़राना

बंद जिसमे कुछ सुनेहरी यादें
लिपटे हसीं चाँदनी पल
चॅम चमाते वक़्त के हीरे
दौड़ रहे ज़ेहन में मेरे
कैसे बाँट सकता हूँ
ये अनमोल ख़ज़ाना
रब तू ही मुझे बता ना

चन्द लम्हो के
सूकों की आरज़ू लिए
छीन लू किसीके
होटो की मुस्कराहट
करके उसे गमगीन

इतना कंजरफ़ मत
बना मुझको यारब
कही हो ना जाए
तेरी तौहीन

यह जानते है सब
ख़ुशी बाटने से होती दुगनी
गम बाटने से कॅम
फिर क्योंकार करे,
ऐसे घाटे का सौदा हम

गर क़यामत के दिन
तुझसे हुआ सामना
तो रो पड़ेंगे तेरे
दामन से लिपट के हम
पर ना बाँटेंगे
तुझसे भी अपने गम
तुझसे भी अपने गम

$kuki

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By  sunil sachdeva   00:05 | 23/Oct/2007 | 12 Comment(s)
I am not a poet

ना मैं कोई शायर हूँ
ना कोई लेखक ना कवि
फिर भी लिखता हूं,
लिखता हूं अंधेरो में बैठकर
मगर लक्ष्य है 'रवि'

पड़ा - लिखा हूं थोड़ा कम
इसीलिए भाषा मे हाथ तंग
जिन शब्दो का कुछ ग्यान मुझे
ले उन्हीको निकला लड़ने जंग

तमाम उम्र ज़िंदगी ने
राह मे बिछाए काँटे
मगर कभी मायूस ना हुए
ना हौसले किए कम
लड़ते रहें ज़िंदगी से
मौत के भी रोके बढ़ते क़दम

चलते रहे काँटो पर
होटों पे लिए मुस्कराहट
एक दिन रब भी हिल जाएगा
सुन लहू सने क़दमो की आहट

मा सरस्वती की जो रही कृपा
जीत लेंगे यारों शब्दो की ये लंका

ये जानते आप भी हो
ये जानता रब भी है
मिलते फूल उन्हीको
जो चलते है
काँटो पे हस हसके

ना मैं कोई शायर हूँ
ना कोई लेखक ना कवि
फिर भी लिखता हूं,
लिखता हूं अंधेरो में बैठकर
मगर लक्ष्य है 'रवि'

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